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More critique please

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OKAY, so a few things have changed. For one, I did some extra binding to my waist to make it less curvy. Hopefully you can tell now. I also screwed my horns into the headband underneath my wig instead of wearing it on top. They kinda ventured to the back of my head again, but they're close enough to the front for it to work I think.

The top pics are there to show my build now (which hopefully looks like a thirteen-year-old male) and overall costume.

The bottom is just some posing trying to get dear Karkles's personality down. Probably should make some sickles to carry around...

Anyway, I'll take one in full troll gray tomorrow since the costume is complete otherwise. But I'd like some overall critique until then. :3
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Definitely buyable. You look like a boy. 13 is pushing it a biiiiit, but from experience sometimes people don't look their age. So that's acceptable. I'd peg you more as 14 in this, but is still spot on.